Do You Need a Military Book Coach?

You don’t have to wander through your writing journey alone. Let a military book coach guide you.
With book coaching, we come alongside you, providing you with continuing support and feedback as you plan, write, and revise your memoir or book.
All of our services include the added value of two editors.
Thanks to our different backgrounds, genders, interests, and experiences, we bring very different things to the table. Randy has a 20+ military career and Laura was a school teacher. Teamwork allows our clients to reap the benefits of much more diverse input than can typically be achieved by a single editor.


Randy and Laura were fun to work with. As an author who had primarily written technical material before this project, I struggled to write clearly to people outside my field. Randy and Laura helped me improve my ability to communicate with a broader audience. I definitely recommend their services to other transitioning military personnel looking to write to a civilian audience.
Working with Randy and Laura has been a humbling experience in the most positive way. I cannot recommend them enough. If you struggle with the outline like I do, they are a great resource to bounce ideas off of. Five/five.
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Products and Pricing
We offer two options for developmental editing to ensure your investment matches your needs.
4 Session Package
$1,200
Best for authors who want help getting started
✓ Guidance on identifying your audience, genre, and more
✓ Help creating a high-level outline that works
✓ Detailed analysis of your scenes (two new scenes per session, limit 3,000 words)
✓ A one-hour Zoom call per session to discuss our feedback and your questions
✓ Continuous email support for the duration of your contract
✓ Encouragement and accountability during your writing journey
✓ Resources and training to grow your skills as a writer
✗ Advice and referrals when you are ready to publish
12 Session Package
$3,500
Best for authors who want ongoing support and feedback
✓ Guidance on identifying your audience, genre, and more
✓ Help creating a high-level outline that works
✓ Detailed analysis of your scenes (two new scenes per session, limit 3,000 words)
✓ A one-hour Zoom call per session to discuss our feedback and your questions
✓ Continuous email support for the duration of your contract
✓ Encouragement and accountability during your writing journey
✓ Resources and training to grow your skills as a writer
✓ Advice and referrals when you are ready to publish
Request a free discovery call about work in progress.
How Can We Help You Write a Better Book?

Do you want someone to come along side you as you write, providing you with continuing support and feedback as you plan, write, or revise your novel?

Do you have a completed manuscript in need of a deep read by a professional who will provide you with detailed feedback, suggestions, and a clear way forward?

Do you have an idea for a book or professional knowledge and experience you want to share with the world, but lack the time or experience to write a book?
