NYT Bestselling Military Editor

With 25 years on active duty and 10 years as an editor, I’m uniquely qualified to help you finish your book.

CEO of Story Grid, Tim Grahl, interviews NYT bestselling author Scott Mann and his editor Randall Surles.

NYT Bestseller Operation Pineapple Express by Scott Mann

To Retired SGM Randy Surles, whose work on this project cannot be overstated. You were at my shoulder every step of the way: writing, editing, troubleshooting. The Story Grid ought to be damn proud of what you brought to the party. Any warrior contemplating writing a book should make their first call to Randy Surles.

From the acknowledgements page

A Military Editor with a Civilian Editor for a Partner.

Randy and Laura, Military Editors.

We’re developmental editors, book coaches, and ghostwriters who help authors outline, write, and edit their books in a multitude of genres.

When you work with us, you get two editors for the price of one:

  • man and woman
  • soldier and civilian
  • Millennial and Gen Xer

With a single round of editing, you will discover how your work resonates across multiple demographics.

We have a diverse range of expertise. From assisting soldiers in sharing their real-life combat experiences in military memoirs to coaching storytellers through the intricacies of harrowing fantasy worlds, heart-wrenching romance, and gripping military or action-thriller novels.

How Can We Help You Write a Better Book?

Poster of the Story Grid Genre Clover, used by the Military Editors to help with genre conventions.

Book Coaching

Do you want someone to come along side you as you write, providing you with continuing support and feedback as you plan, write, or revise your novel?

Laptop, microphone, and Story Grid Universe Book.

Developmental Editing

Do you have a completed manuscript in need of a deep read by a professional who will provide you with detailed feedback, suggestions, and a clear way forward?

Torso of a young lady using a laptop.

Ghostwriting

Do you have an idea for a book or professional knowledge and experience you want to share with the world, but lack the time or experience to write a book?

Request a free discovery call about work in progress.

Rich Fettke, author of The Wise Investor.

Amazon Bestseller The Wise Investor by Rich Fettke

Massive thanks to you, Randy Surles, for helping me create a captivating, inspiring, and powerful story. And thank you for bringing the talented Laura Graves into the process. The two of you were a joy to work with.

Rich Fettke, author of Amazon bestsellerThe Wise Investor

Listen to some of our Podcasts!

Learn to Write better stories with the Story Grid Showrunners Podcasts.

Learn about Human Trafficking with Selling Girls in America

Hear discussions about various topics, from healthcare to traveling to fitness, on the Passionately Wrong Podcast

Computer, microphone, and earphones.